noblesentiments ([info]noblesentiments) wrote,
@ 2007-11-19 12:06:00
Previous Entry  Add to memories!  Tell a Friend  Next Entry
Sule Skerrie by Shoshanna
A beautifully written, strange yet compelling story. One of the most enduring impressions I'm left with after reading Sule Skerrie is how strong the atmosphere is - an atmosphere which reflects the pervasive presence of one of the story's main characters, the sea - dark, brooding and powerful. And yet there’s a quiet to this story and a certain serenity which is reflected in the character of Raymond: a solitary, lonely, unfulfilled young man whose life and expectations are dominated and almost mirrored by the black void which is the ocean.... until one day he encounters a beautiful sea-creature emerging from the deep:

Fingers snatched and clung; the man hung, gasping, from the wooden beam and Raymond pulled the boat closer, hand over hand. Reaching down, he helped the other man climb over the gunwale; the boat rocked alarmingly and he shifted his weight to counterbalance as the stranger collapsed in the bottom of the boat, retching seawater. Raymond shipped the oar and bent to inspect him.

He was naked, and his pale body was almost hairless, unlike Raymond and most of the swarthy men of the village, though like him the stranger was cleanshaven. Only the short cap of hair on his head gleamed wetly black, and Raymond had a quick glimpse of black curls before he averted his eyes out of respect for the other man's nudity, stripping off his woolen tunic to wrap it around the gasping figure and help him sit up. "Easy, man. Can you speak?"


a sea-creature who turns his life upside down:

.......You are a seducer," he whispered. "You will steal me away and abandon me, and I will be lost, or return like the tale to find a hundred years passed by and all my people gone."

"Shh." Bodie hugged him tighter. "Abandon you? Have I not watched you all the spring, singing on the ocean? Did I not bring you to the house I was born in? You will be mine, and I will be yours, and we will abandon the world for each other." He laughed softly. "As for a hundred years, in that time we shall both be gone, whether to heaven or hell or the bellies of the fish. Shall we not see what the world can show us before then?" Raymond turned then and caught Bodie's head in his hands, kissing him deeply before pressing himself into Bodie's arms, his own tight around the dripping shoulders.

"I will be damned," he murmured......


A lovely piece of writing which can be found at all the usual places, plus the author's website:

http://www.thisland.ca/



(18 comments) - (Post a new comment)


[info]angel_ci5
2007-11-19 06:06 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for this, and the lovely quotes. I haven't read this story, but I will now - it sounds very intriguing and I adore AUs.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]shooting2kill
2007-11-19 07:49 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much for your interest and for letting me know that you haven't read this story - it's always a bonus to know that I might be bringing something new to someone! I hope you enjoy it.

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]byslantedlight
2007-11-20 12:26 pm UTC (link)
Oh, I adore this story, and you're right, so much of its wonder for me is to do with the atmosphere that's created, you can feel the times, and the sea, and the need they both have to break out of that world. It's so gorgeous! It reminds me of another story, atmosphere-wise, by Irene, which is only available in Roses and Lavender 2, sadly. There's the same sort of... brave-innocent atmosphere to it, I think, the idealism of Doyle turned to a kind of innocence, perhaps, just waiting for Bodie to give him the excuse he needs - the overwhelmingness of their need to be together - to escape from the world that he's forced to live in by that innocence (Doyle's ideals?) Hmmn - as usual I'm making this up as I go along, but I was trying to think why such AU characters should still ring true to me, and I think that might be it: Bodie is the more worldly wise, although it doesn't make him any smarter or able to avoid danger etc, Doyle is tied to the different worlds by his idealism/beliefs but that doesn't make him less smart or prone to danger - they're suited because they complement each other so well... Well. That's what I reckon... *g*

Thank you - another lovely review/rec!

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]shooting2kill
2007-11-20 01:01 pm UTC (link)
Oh, thank *you*! And yes! Bodie as 'worldly wise' and Doyle the idealist is a perfect analysis of both of them and I'd say is one of the major ingredients of their interaction. And I love the sound of Irene's story with Bodie injured and Doyle as the lighthouse keeper.....in fact it sounds very familiar to me, I think I might have read it..............

Thanks for dropping by!

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]gilda_elise
2007-11-20 12:46 pm UTC (link)
I'd forgotten about this story, which is strange because I did enjoy it ever so much. Thanks for the review and the reminder.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]shooting2kill
2007-11-20 01:21 pm UTC (link)
Thanks so much for that, Gilda. I love knowing that maybe I've reminded people of stories that they'd forgotten (or even missed).

Happy reading!

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]kiwisue
2007-11-20 01:22 pm UTC (link)
I do like the idea of Bodie as a silkie - sleek and dark *g*.

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]shooting2kill
2007-11-20 01:27 pm UTC (link)
I do like the idea of Bodie as a silkie - sleek and dark *g*.

Yeah! The perfect analogy, isn't it? And I liked the way the author described how Bodie sat down with both legs resting on one side (can't find the quote) - it was just so clever.

Thanks, Sue.

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]paris7am
2007-11-20 01:53 pm UTC (link)
I love the way you've described the sea and its role in the story, plus how you've tied it in with Doyle's character... Perfect! It is a beautiful, beautiful piece.

I was thinking about the morality play themes to the story, and thinking about how in an odd round-about way, it reminds me a bit of how I felt when I came upon the "silkie" of Pros slash. (Swam away into another world and haven't looked back...)

I love the way the author presents Bodie's charming and charmed side in this. The way she has him telling tales of other worlds, spinning stories, with sparkling eyes but never too much bravado and never with overconfidence - I think it's the quality of innocence about him combined with his absolute vulnerability to Doyle - in my memory of the story, he doesn't shield himself, but reveals everything, it all.

I just went and snipped this little vignette, which always makes me happy...

Bodie took another bit of the white meat between his fingers and ate it raw. Seeing Raymond's start of surprise, he licked his fingers and grinned. "There are lands where raw fish is a great delicacy, you know."

"Truly? They must be very strange."

"Oh, they are." And Bodie began to spin a wild tale of men with yellow skin and eyes like cats, who ate raw fish and whose women bore their children in litters. Raymond listened wide-eyed, half believing, until Bodie added that each woman had six nipples, to nurse the babies; at that Raymond snorted disbelief and Bodie laughed.

"All right," he admitted, "I have never been to that country myself. But I had it from my father, who had it from a Venetian sailor, years ago. And my father never lied!"

"And the Venetian?" retorted Raymond.

"Who knows?" answered Bodie, unbothered. "I put in the nipples myself; I thought it went well."

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]shooting2kill
2007-11-20 02:19 pm UTC (link)
Oh P, I found myself nodding in agreement and happiness when I read your comments! You've got this wonderful knack of expressing what I'm trying to express. (Can you have thought before language? I'm sure I heard someone say that on the radio the other day? Because I always seem to have pictures/outlines of images in my head before I'm able (if ever) to translate them into words).

I love this: Swam away into another world and haven't looked back... - I think we all do it

I think it's the quality of innocence about him combined with his absolute vulnerability to Doyle - in my memory of the story, he doesn't shield himself, but reveals everything.....

Yes! So perceptive. One of the best things about mentioning stories here is the way people make such interesting comments and bring my attention to things which have either been buried deep in my sub-conscious, or I hadn't even noticed before!

Thanks for this, Paris.

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]noblesentiments
2007-11-20 02:33 pm UTC (link)

"Who knows?" answered Bodie, unbothered. "I put in the nipples myself; I thought it went well."

Oh, and that is so Bodie, isn't it? i.e. the maxim that a good yarn doesn't have to be true, just entertaining! And how clever of the author to transport Bodie into another world and another being and yet still retain the essence of his character. sighs.......

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]paris7am
2007-11-21 04:04 pm UTC (link)
doesn't have to be true, just entertaining
Exactly! As in the rich and varied tales he spins to colour his past...

(Reply to this) (Parent)


[info]rosie55
2007-11-20 04:14 pm UTC (link)
I hadn't read this story before but AUs are amongst some of my favourite fics so I was very happy to read it.
And, sorry to be the odd one out here, but I really didn't enjoy it at all! I couldn't relate these characters to my B&D, I could quite see the appeal of the atmospheric writing but it could have been standalone fic about two other characters for me. I've seen other people say that about other stories which I don't have this problem with and it is unusual for me not to get into an AU at all, but no. Just didn't press my buttons!
Thinking about it, this may be partly because I realise that I don't go much generally on stories where either character transforms into animals/werewolves/vampires/cats. My mind started to shear away the moment I realised where the silkie/Bodie link was headed!
I think I may read it again in a month or two to see whether I still feel the same - when so many people who I usually share tastes with like a story, it deserves a second reading!
Sorry to be the party-pooper!

(Reply to this) (Thread)


[info]shooting2kill
2007-11-20 08:50 pm UTC (link)
Sorry to be the party-pooper!

Rosie, you poop as much as you like! I'm just very pleased that you've read it and taken the trouble to post. Thank you.

And I must be honest and say that even though I like it, I can really understand why other people might not like it. I'm the same as you in that I usually can't stand stories where either of them are anything but human - I just can't be bothered with them - but there was something about the atmosphere which captivated me (at times it was almost depressing, too), Doyle's lonely existence was sort of melancholic which often seems to be the case in stories I like..... in fact I'm gradually coming round to the view that it's the atmosphere of a story which is the all-important factor for me and the first thing I look for and which keeps me reading it, even more than the actual plot (mind you, I think plots are fairly rare in Pros stories).

And the characterisation? I think there was just about enough of my usual Bodie for me to able to hang my hooks on this character and claim him as my bodie: the physical description (apart from the fact that he's a sea-creature!), the enigma of the stranger (the tall, dark, handsome stranger seems to fit my bodie), the man of the world with a sense of humour; but, as Paris pointed out above, accompanied by a slight vulnerability which I think the ci5 Bodie has and which makes him quite a complex character. And Doyle? Yeah.... not really my favourite version of Doyle but I can see just about enough of him to accept him as a young Doyle who lives a solitary life and he's much like other, fictional Doyles whose characterisations I don't really agree with but I'm so used to them now that they've become fairly acceptable!

Anyway, Rosie, thanks again for reading it and popping in.

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]rosie55
2007-11-21 05:10 pm UTC (link)
You said "I usually can't stand stories where either of them are anything but human".
I think it's even more specific than that for me, it's the whole transformation bit, Doyle turning into a cat, Bodie into a seal, either of them into anything other, so that they are partly normal blokes and partly assorted fauna. Just can't cope with descriptions of Doyle suddenly transmogrifying or sprouting fur (or fangs or whatever!) and transforming in front of someone's eyes. The ones where Doyle is not at home when Bodie calls but a ginger cat wanders out of the bedroom don't do a lot for me either! If they are elves or whatever all the way through, at least you know what you're getting!
I can read, though wouldn't actually seek out a bit of supernatural now and again but that's about my limit!
I've seen people talk about their particular "kinks" in what they like, this must be my anti-kink!

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]shooting2kill
2007-11-21 08:29 pm UTC (link)
I know exactly what you mean.....I'm heard many times that the stories where they morph into something else are well written but I just can't be bothered with that sort of thing - it leaves me cold and with so much *other* good stuff around you don't need to read what you don't want to read. Life's just too short for that! (Also, I'm not that fond of stories which are *very* funny and I believe some of those storees are). But I will say (and admit) that a short time after I discovered Pros I fell in love with the first few chapters of The Hunting which depicts Doyle is an elf. I don't think I'd like them as much now but at the time one of the things I loved about the beginning of the story was Doyle's temporary blindness and his dependence on Bodie because of this. I loved that. And I think it was beautifully written with flair, imagination, was completely escapist and succeeded in creating a whole new world for me. (And Doyle's elf status didn't impinge that much on the story apart from a few references to his large ears!). But the story did get very repetitive.

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]rosie55
2007-11-21 09:33 pm UTC (link)
Oh, that's interesting! I was actually given The Hunting last year and have been slowly working my way through it, interspersed with other stuff when I needed a break (sometimes for several months!) And, like you, I felt that was very well done, though incredibly long and, yes, it did get repetitive. But skillfully done and I did find the characters of Bodie and Ray were believable in that, even with Ray as an elf. The sheer imagination and world building is amazing. So I knew it wasn't that I didn't like them in any other world, just not as animals!

(Reply to this) (Parent)(Thread)


[info]shooting2kill
2007-11-21 10:55 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad you're enjoying it. When I first read The Hunting I fell in love with it to the extent that I even tried tracking down the author, Jane, but without success. Much, much later when I did come across her she said she remembered writing it with much fondness and that it had been a very happy episode in her life and that she would have loved to discuss it, but by then I couldn't remember all the bits I wanted to talk about! I keep meaning to return to it or read some of the later books.

(Reply to this) (Parent)


(18 comments) - (Post a new comment)

Create an Account
Forgot your login or password?
Login w/ OpenID
English • Español • Deutsch • Русский…